Angle on train, in tunnel. Inside the yellow-lit car of the train, through a window, we see Reg.

THREE:

Reg is making marks on a map -- he's getting the lay of the land.

FOUR:

Shot of Reg on top of an above-ground ICL station, sitting Indian style, making notes still

SIX:

Angle on Reggie's watch -- it's about 9:15pm.

REG CAPTION: Shoot, if I'm not back by nine-thirty, I'm in serious trouble.

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A collage, large shots, of Reggie riding atop an express train, running along a ledge of an old iron building, hopping another train (or sky car?...[like the kind in larger amusement parks]) and finally climbing from a tree to his window.

REG (thought balloon): Yeahhh...a cool superhero name...

ONE:

Shot of newspaper, headline reads: PHANTOM KID RUNS AGAIN

TWO:

Angle on street, bird's eye view. Chalk outlines, ambulances, police cars, news vans, and reporters and crowds -- they're all there.

THREE:

Angle on Det. Emilio Lopez. Big guy. He's talking to another plain clothes Det. (just for the fun of it, let's make the other Tec look like Brisco from Law & Order)

Collage of a scene which begins with a long vertical panel similar to the story splash: the scene is of a gang doing some hazing...the girl PK carried up the fire escape (seen earlier) is present.

ONE:

Back to cops...

TWO:

THREE:

FOUR

ONE:

It's late. In the dorm, we see Reg and Crain in their beds (Reg's shiner should be almost gone). Crain is dutifully reading a good-sized book with a little book light; Reg uses a flashlight to see the paper.

TWO:

THREE:

Shot of Reg smiling. On this shot we can see the newspaper laying on his chest (a NY Post-type of paper), and the headline, which reads, COPS SAY P.K. OK!

Reg is in class (this classroom should be a well-decorated, extremely clean and somewhat elegant room as is fitting for a private school), Gordo is shooting spitballs at Reg's ear throughout the scene.

ONE:

This panel is a thought balloon of a supercool Phantom Kid -- more "professional" looking, with an added cape, cool belt and a few other modifications.... The thought balloon that is this picture leads to the head of Reggie Reynolds in the next frame.

TWO:

Reg is doodling...we can see a bad sketch (he's NOT an artist) of the PK costume. He's also making a list of needed extras: a cape, utility belt, smoke pellets, infra-red binoculars, shield, grapling hook [yes, "grappling" is misspelled...that's how it should look on the page].

THREE:

Reg gets a spitball in the ear and winces.

FOUR:

Reg is adding narrow eye-slits to the mask -- he's overdoing it, making PK look like something from a bad Image comic of the early '90s...except that his drawing is completely awful.

FIVE:

Another spitball is shot.

SIX:

Reg is now writing the words "Phantom Kid" in different superhero-type fonts.

SEVEN:

Another spitball

EIGHT:

Gordo slyly passes a straw to his friend to help get Reg with spitballs.

NINE:

Gordo and his buddy, both with the straws at their mouths, are shooting.

SFX: fwhhoo! fwhhoo!

ONE: Extreme close-up of Reg's ear...a much smaller "fwhhoo! fwhhoo!" in the background.

TWO: The two wads of paper hit a hand which speeds into view.

THREE: Shot of the two bullies laughing.

FOUR: Reg looks down at his hand -- at the spitballs he caught -- disgusted.

REG (thought balloon): I guess he didn't care much for my apology note.

FIVE: The bell rings.

SIX:

Gordo and his buddy (who I just might name some day) walk by.

SEVEN:

Smaller panel...Reg's eyes are narrow -- he wants to hit Gordo.

ONE: Large(-ish) panel. Still in classroom as boys shuffle out. Gordo's taken an exaggerated step forward towards Reg (the kind one does to goad an opponent or make him flinch), fist at the ready. Reg is standing tense and straight.

SFX (coming from foot at floor): STOMP!

TWO:

Close on Gordo as he's getting chastised from off-panel teacher.

THREE:

Shot of Gordo and teacher -- Gordo's buddy ducking out in the background.

FOUR:

Reg in hallway, heading to another class.

FIVE:

Reg takes a seat in his next classroom (let's make it science so it'll be visually different from the previous class).

Full Page shot. At top, across page, Reg leaning on his desk, obviously day-dreaming; this picture blends down into what is about 4/5 of the page: an action shot (street, running, jumping, a fight, a rescue -- whichever) of Phantom Kid in what will be the final version of his uniform.