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WHAT IS PHANTOM KID? A classic superhero tale harkening back to 1960s Marvel comics. High on action, the story is about an average teenage guy, with old-fashioned sensibilities, trying to survive in today's world. |
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ISSUE #1 SPLASH PAGE:
As per its name, this "Splash" page is a full-page panel
Phantom Kid stands upon a tractor; small-town folks point & stare.
Burst balloon (points to several people): Reggie Reynolds is the Phantom Kid!
CAPTION: It ain't easy being you. Or being a hero. Especially when you're
a guy just trying to hang out, B as kool as can B, and get through school
AFAP. Reg was just another kid -- but the townsfolk in Harvest, Illinois
felt he was special.
CAPTION 2: At 16, lots of kids are waiting for life to begin...but Reg's life
was forced upon him by well-meaning folks. Ready or not, as the Phantom Kid, he'll
fight cops, teachers, politicians, gang bangers, superheroes, a coupl'a thugs at school
and even his own dad.
And, one of those people will die by his hand.
CAPTION 3: Phantom Kid will also battle prejudice, disease, fate, and human nature. Chances of winning those battles? Slim. But that's getting years ahead of this story...
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Full PAGE of stormy Railway City. Lightning splashes whiteness between buildings -- an heroic
figure is lit from below and behind as he leaps towards the street.
The following panels are small insets of the stormy Full page panel -- make them a little smaller than what you might do normally, as they're just basic shots of panoramic landscape.
PANEL ONE:
REG CAPTION 1: "I feel different than everyone else, but I guess I'm not...
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PANEL TWO:
still bird's eye, closing in on town...
REG CAPTION (cont'd): "When I was twelve, a friend at a camping trip told me this perticular dream I have all the time means I want freedom.
PANEL THREE:
Town now fills up most of panel, little sky visible. Good ol' mid-western folk can be seen
now, along with some pick-up trucks and whatnot.
REG CAPTION (cont'd): "I guess it's true. At home, my mom, sister, an' I had lots of tense times.
Next caption are on the main pic of PAGE
REG CAPTION 2 (cont'd): "Freedom? I haven't had it since...
REG CAPTION 3 (cont'd): "...since everyone decided I should leave home."
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TITLE: The Phantom Kid is Here -- And Gone!
Credits:
Writer: Keith Planit; Artist ; Letterer ; Colorist |
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PANEL TWO:
We pull back in this shot, POV is through a window.
PANEL THREE:
A silhouetted figure suddenly sits up, shoulder bandaged. This is Reginald Reynolds.
Reg: What's happ-- oh...
PANEL FOUR:
Good shot of Reg now (Good looking, unassuming, very mid-western in a charming sort of way... light brown/reddish hair, freckles. He's not so much a really big kid as just a sturdy one), we can see him in bed, grabbing his shoulder lightly.
REG: ...Right.
FOUR:
A woman stands at the doorway. She's an older lady, overweight, plain-looking. This is MRS. WESTERLY.
WESTERLY: You okay, Reggie? You woke up with a start.
REG: I'm okay, I think. Confused for a moment -- you know, not waking up in my bed an' all.
REG 2: How is, um--?
WESTERLY: Perfectly all right. Ms. Mason and the little one escaped with just some cuts
and bruises. You fared about as well as the car, but Sidney says you'll be fine, and
that shoulder'll be like new in a few weeks.
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PANEL ONE: Close on Reggie. Looking at audience.
REG CAPTION: I bet you're wondering. Wondering what happen' in my dumb, little town in the
middle of who-knows-where
of the thing they call "America's Bread Basket."
REG CAPTION 2: It was scary and it was, well, crazy. And I think I'm a lucky guy.
I mean, I guess I am, because I do really know what I'm gonna do. With my life.
REG CAPTION 3: And it's cool that this whole town's behind me... |
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TWO:
Medium shot of average townsfolk, an average FELLA, nondescript.
| NOTE TO ARTIST: This and the succeeding medium shots of people telling the story of the crash should all look like small-town man-on-the street stuff...but there is no reporter. They're just telling the readers. |
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FELLA: It was amazing, I'll tell you. This kid, Reggie, always best player on school
baseball, he's striding down this street like it was a beautiful spring day...
THREE:
FOUR:
FELLA CAPTION: "Mrs. Mason is cradling her littlest one, driving. That baby is crying
something awful..."
MS. MASON: Shhh, don't worry baby, we'll almost at the doctor's...everything will be
okay! Come on, honey, shhh, shhh, Mommy's taking care of you...
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PANEL ONE:
REG CAPTION: "It was raining, and I was soaked but who cares?
REG CAPTION 2 (cont'd): "I just heard from my bud Tom that this girl, and she's, well,
it's not like she's a hottie, but she's like really cute and -- skip to the best part --
totally into me!"
TWO:
DOC WESTERLY: Well, I was waiting for Ms. Mason for about 5 minutes only, since I got
the call about her baby.
DOC 2: It seems her son, who had just learned to walk, oh, gosh, I dunno, two weeks
ago? It seems he kinda fell down and somehow landed on a stray nail. Poor li'l fella.
THREE:
MS. MASON: Okay, okay, my strong little man, we're just about there.
FOUR:
FIVE:
SIX:
SEVEN:
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Back to the close-up of Reggie
ONE:
REG CAPTION 2:
TWO:
TEEN: I don't know. It was like, amazing. I'm not friends with Reg Reynolds, but I've
seen how fast and stuff he is. And you know what?
TEEN 2 (cont'd): He really is...
THREE:
TEEN CAPTION: "I don't know what the deal with that mom was, but her baby just,
like, completely rolled outta that window...
FIVE:
TEEN CAPTION: "And Reg, when he was just like on the sidewalk a second earlier, now has one
arm cradling the baby and another hanging on to the door of the truck.
TEEN CAPTION 2: "Oh, and his feet were moving so fast. For a minute I thought he was
gonna push the truck back on its other wheels. (Stop it! I really did!)"
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PANEL ONE:
MRS. R: I'm almost used to it. He's got a gift, I'll tell you. My mother believed that
everyone has a reason for being here...
MRS. R. 2: ...saving that baby was just a small part of the big picture I think. He's going
to help a whole lot of people that boy.
TWO:
MRS. WESTERLY: It was the scariest thing we'd ever seen with our own eyes, wasn't it, Sidney?
Sidney is nodding.
DOC SIDNEY: I don't know what the boy was thinking.
THREE:
REG CAPTION: "I can't really tell you what my plan was.
'What was I thinking?' Beats the holy heck outta me.
REG CAPTION 2: All I know is that the truck went down hard, and I went with it...
FOUR:
LARGE PANEL, TAKING UP MOST OF PAGE. The truck is crashing with Reg losing his grip on the
frame of the window of the passenger door (which his right arm was holding) -- his shoulder
getting gashed as he slides off of the breaking door. The baby is in his left arm, safe.
REG CAPTION: "...and the baby came away unhurt.
REG CAPTION 2: "'Cept for that nail in his butt."
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Part 2
Rain-soaked streets, NIGHT...a car is seen heading down the dirt road at center of town.
Reggie can be seen on this lonely street, striding along happily
POV inside car.
Close-up of Reggie again.
Medium shot of Dr. Westerly.
Back in the car, Mason's got her baby in hand as she drives quickly down the small town road.
Outside, she turns the corner as some kid on a skateboard skitters about.
Close-up of Ms. Mason shocked!
Close-up of kid, skateboard slipping away on rain-soaked street, numb with fear as
headlight beams hit him.
Close-up of Mason spinning the wheel to avoid a collision with the child.
REG CAPTION: "I'm not a bigshot or nothin'. But when you find out Becky Stearns
is doodling your name in her looseleaf, geez, your brain is saying you're the greatest
thing since...the invention of sunrise or something.
"So from the peripheral of my vision, as some folks looked on, something
caught my attention..."
Teenager and her friends, medium shot.
From here, we see what she narrates:
FOUR:

TEEN CAPTION (continuing): "...just that fast! Like that old show, The Six Bazillion
Dollar Man or whatever. He's movin' at the truck in, like, super slow motion or something
and the truck is on two side wheels, like it was about to tip over.
NOTE TO ARTIST:
This is the passenger-side window she describes
This shot is indoors -- not a man-on-the-street shot. It's a quaint home and we're looking
at Mrs. Reynolds, Reggie's mom (we know this by pictures surrounding her of Reg and
the rest of his family [his dad and one little sister]).
Shot of Doc Westerly & the Mrs. This IS a man-on-the-street shot.
Close-up on Reg again.
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